I didn't like it I guess.
The bassline is what really bothered me and at like 1:00 or so when everything did it...it was just ehh. The melodies throughout were also very, erratic. The form of the song was ok for the most part but I reallly disliked the drum kick. Ahhh i hate that drum kick. Otherwise it's ok for just starting off...but try to develop your own original style if your going to do trance and techno. Because like all forms of music trance and techno suffer from copycat syndrome. Where's there's a lead synth arping some chords and the drum patterns are even more preset. Because if you don't use a particular drumset your not making trance...which is why I hate techno and trance particulary. I like the leads and such in trance but the drumsets...are always so generic. So yeah...just keep working...i didn't like this one...it just didn't sound very good...I won't vote on it though. But i would have given you probably a 3. But to not lower your score I won't mess with it.