A damn fool.
Idiot.
A damn fool.
Idiot.
xD damn yo you prolly see all the messages i sentcha, we need youuuu mang aint no body beats like yours lol lets get famous now.
Yeah that's the terrible version of that song...
Damn I sent you the one without the samples...damn...I'm fucking up. Shit banging though.
Oh look, the n***a who made it all happen arrives.. but yeaaah you told me it was just a preview beat but i was in love with the shit T.T
Aighttt...
This is real right here. It's like some classic NYC rap. The sample is relatively crisp. It's a smooth track in general but for the most part I THOUGHT the percussion was little bland though. I like the track though in general, the chord flowed well and the verses were good they just lacked emotion sometimes. But it was hot though. It's real shit. I can appreciate shit like this.
I didn't make the beat
I did like the beat..
The vocals though...i don't take points for quality commonly but...I mean who every rapped just sound a bit clownish. This is a Jazz, RnB beat meaning for what's it's worth the voices need to fit the song. It needs to be smooth. The beat is entirely smooth, but the vocal just rips it. To give constructive critiism, smooth out the flow of the rap. Also the sample was a bit, strange, like it contested with itself on the chorus. I mean yeah it's a sample but the drums fight each other and the percussion battles with itself.... Ion no...
The vocals are mine and I beg to differ on the tone. It's not clowny Its more optimistic and happier instead of smooth and jazzy. I meant to record like that to give the listeners an optimistic feel when listening, I respect your opinion though. The sample is repetitive because its a sample lol nothing else to tell you, as for the drums I personally thought the mix was good. Thank you for your feedback
God...everything is like all messed up..
Man I just left a party, it was loud ass hell, I mean crazy loud. It was fun though but when I listen to my own beats my ears can't hear all the tones or something so everything sounds horribly outta tune...i mean like none of the notes sound in-tune it's so horrible...man...I need my ears to return to their true form. Anyway listening to the words and such. It's nice, and I'm guessing it's in tune on the singing...hell ion no whats happening man....it sounds nice though...
yo man its all good, getcha rest and shit relax ya mind fool. lol when ya feel normal again get back up on here and hit a brotha up :D
It was nice. The beat was real.
Moving around is ill-advised....and if you are gone do. Fuck with volumes to turn yaself up when you back away. anyway, it was pretty decent man. I liked it though.
lol yea i know. get a lil carried away when im feelin tha flow. i got another one on the way but i need a new mic first. and i think ima do it solo this time..anyway, thx man.
You outta let me drop a verse on my on track. Hah
Yep. It's auto-hot. AUTO-Hot.
you really wanna be on it to ? Shit, why not ? make it longer throw yourself on it and pass it back :D
Hey! who made that beat!
Aw yeah. That junt was pretty hot. I'd turn the music a lil bit. the balance is just a bit off. AND also I'd ask your producer to make a version that's abit longer so you can't fit in a second verse. It'd be some top notch shit then. still got the ten though cuz it's nice as hell.
haha, glad you liked it xD
Yo i like it but.
I liked it buuut i felt like me and your drums was doing some clashing and such. If you want I will send you a no-percussion version so you can have more freedom with it you know. Its got a really good flow...and the background chords are very smooth. It was intresting mix with some productivity issues but all in all it was a smooth idea with a very nice ending* ^-^ Anywho keep it up man. But all in I'd definately get rid of my drums and put your own ones over. It'll make for a much better mix. Good shit though, so this is what it feels like to be remixed...nice man. 5 vote!? And a ten cause you remixed my song haah.
aww. lawl, thanks a lot man. yea i kinda clashed the percussion, and i was gonna re-do it.. buut i liked how it ended up, and since it was my first remix i wanted to keep it like that ya know. thanks for the support. make more songs and i'll remix more too haha! =3
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Joined on 12/22/07