Ok? How is this hiphop?
This really sound like one big preset. I guess it works though. I don't have anything to add that S-3-C didn't say below. So uuuh do that.
Ok? How is this hiphop?
This really sound like one big preset. I guess it works though. I don't have anything to add that S-3-C didn't say below. So uuuh do that.
This isn't a response to this particular review, I'm just writing it here because for some reason I can't remove or edit this track in any way. I just want everyone to know that I know it sucks, and if I could I would have deleted it earlier today when I was deleting a bunch of other songs I submitted. I must have been high as shit when I made it and submitted it, judging by how retarded I sound in my "author comments" and by the fact that I apparently thought this song was worth posting for the world to see. Listen at your own risk
You know that aint even fair.
Yo man you don't a zero like dat. It's kinda loopy but uh whatever man.
lmao well thanks for tha 6 yo.
What I think.
The intro was pretty long man. But otherwise fine. Really have to kick up your intro into the kicks. Your using a classic style of introduction to songs where you place a piece ontop of a piece. Overall a pretty snoozy intro. The bass comes and the chord progression isn't exactly where it needs to sit. The balance goes a lil crazy too when the strings come in crazy loud and hitting a pretty loud 3rd. But it was fine. I would suggest instead of your current form of Intro-Intro w/kick-bassfill/kick you use something more traditional. It bring up the actual overall quality. Possibly radio form as hip/hop tends to do. Your kind of doing trance form now. Intro-Chorus-Verse-Chorus-Verse-Outro . I do like the diversity of the background sounds such as the deep blips and such. Overall it was pretty good. Work on your form and you definitely got something going. Nice fade at the end as well. Keep it up man.
Thanks for the review. At least I know what to work on now.
Alright this is nice.
This piano is super nice man. Very good arrangement on it. Even the strings at 1:00 were nice. The chord progressions in this track are very nice. The snare is kind of low but you know ok. The bass drum is even kind of soft. Like I can't really hear it out of my subwoofers. None the less this is a nice beat. Man keep it up.
Hey, The real version of this song Is at my myspace. Its Less Filtered. More Umph.
We can see.
Since somebody else made the beat I aint gone just leave to much about it. But the lyrics go hard though. Nuttin to say bout really.
good looks..yea im not really a beat maker but i can spit so thats wat i do...good looks on the comment
Um?
i wasn't having a bit of trouble trying to figure out why your percussion was so low? Like the claps or snare (can't tell so low.) The melodies were kinda awkward for me...but ok I can deal with that. Hell I even like the drums throughout even though they kinda flip out at times. But That's cool since it's a mix and it's just kinda like a head bopper. I don't know what to tell you man. It's just crazy. Kinda circus like in slow motion.
((( LastEncore )))
Thanks For The Review :)
Actually This Was More Of An Experiment In Ambiance ,
It Was All About How The Tones Might Play Off Each Other
When They Seem To Be Placed At Various Sounding " Distances " ...
The Drum Tones " Flipping-Out " Is Just About The Pulsation Effect,
Used To Represent The Heart Of The Track ( With An Irregular Rhythm ) .
Well, That's ME , Making My Art That Mirrors Moments
Of MY So Called Life ...
== THANKS FOR TURNIN' IT ON & LEAVING A REVIEW ==
Mr W. A. D2
Sounds a bit toy factory!?
Hell. I've listened to most of your songs over awhile now. I don't no why I haven't favorite d you yet because your drums always have a good flow. This one is intresting at the least but the drums are what I listen to in your tracks anyhow. Nice man.
Glad you like the drums! I appreciate your comments man, thanks for the review :)
To be fucking around!
This is actually really dope! I no what it is bout at around 30 secs it just has a nice vibe and flow to it. Nice man Nice! Keep it up.
Thanks again!
Good vibe.
FIrst off this got a nice vibe to it. That guitar is nice. Is it a sample? And that FL piano ain't that bad if you use it correctly. You know reverb that hell out of it. You have to put effects to it if you want it to do some real damage. I can give you an example on my first song really. Listen to my "Cheap" piano. Except I tweaked it alot.
Thats that cheap FL piano everybody hates. http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/112926
Yeah; when Warspawn heard this, he hooked me up with some piano soundfonts. And the guitar is a sample (from "90% of Me is With You" by Gwen McCrea). I'll listen to your stuff. Peace.
Something about it?!
It's good. I'll admit Particularly around around 1:40 but i just can't get into it. Because it just doesn't feel right for whatever. And around 2:18 and similar parts it's doesn't flow quite well and the balance drops off. Good non the less. Deserves it's spot ontop of the portal.
Thanks for the review - listened to some of your work, its tight.
Just doing music like always...
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