Well.
Generally it wasn't very intresting. The piano doesn't do very much for the chord changes the song holds. The basis of it is just rather boring. The 1-3 hits of it are just very repetitive. For the most part it sounds very preset with some effects thrown in for good measure. The delays on the piano were just. Lacking any real reason. It didn't make it more interesting it just made it double boring. Form wise it just seemed to chug along and overall had some iffy balance that didn't seem quite right at times. The beginning was for the most part the only good part. Otherwise I'd never listen to this more than once. It doesn't build to a climax and has no true transitions. Not even a cymbal or to. Well actually it has no percussion. Odd choice but respectable. So no percussion means no transitions or very hard transitions(only one noticable is the toms at the start-best part). But this includes neither. This song needs alot of work it in general lacks plenty of things. Plenty I just mentioned the obvious.