I did like the beat..
The vocals though...i don't take points for quality commonly but...I mean who every rapped just sound a bit clownish. This is a Jazz, RnB beat meaning for what's it's worth the voices need to fit the song. It needs to be smooth. The beat is entirely smooth, but the vocal just rips it. To give constructive critiism, smooth out the flow of the rap. Also the sample was a bit, strange, like it contested with itself on the chorus. I mean yeah it's a sample but the drums fight each other and the percussion battles with itself.... Ion no...