Score: 3

"You have won the Finals-You are the Champ"

submission: Two Player Soccer

date: November 12, 2009

Well I didn't have the issues others had. I had an entirely different color. I couldn't STOP scoring goals. I would get the kick off every time regardless of who did what. And I would power it right past the goalie. Sometimes goals that were grazed the pipes would still count. At any rate I won the entire thing. 5-0, 5-0,4-1,5-0,6-0 And in the finals I scored three times as the timer still read 60.

Another thing no matter what round it always says "Blue Goalie Stops" when clearly he's yellow, or violent or green.

Overall it was a bad game. I could move so much faster then the ball and the computer so it didn't matter what kind of shot they took because I could hyper speed and stop it. My goalie never had to do anything.

On a side note...clearly it's called 2-player because...only 2 players per team..

Score: 10

"Sadly."

submission: COGS OF WAR 2

date: January 17, 2009

That was accurate. Nice

Score: 10

"Beautiful."

submission: Legend of Miyamoto

date: October 23, 2008

The Stone star was Epic. Great. I can't even conceive what to tell you how to improve...great work.

Score: 8

"A flowing river damned before the ocean...."

submission: Bob Ya Head

date: November 7, 2009

You have seven chords here... The first three are beautiful. After that...well the progression is rather...uninviting. Now I can't really determine the flow of your progressions but honestly some of those later chords seems a better under expressed and random. <<<Not a bad thing, but in my opinion they could have been truly beautiful if thought it more clearly.

Basically the bass notes lose focus...and when that happens the top half usually goes astray. Hell I actually went ahead and put these chords down in FL Studio and...against my better judgement had to finish them in a way I would have...

It's like I can see them...I can see what you wanted but you couldn't quite put it down that way...I don't know if that's the case but it really feels that way...I don't know maybe it's just me.

On a side note...I like the percussion. And the actual melody is rather nice.

Constructively though, God I hate to tell people how I think they should make music...but don't take it that way. I'm not trying to tell you how to make music because by no means am I "a better" beat maker. Whatever better really means. But maybe try, just maybe this helped me alot...making songs with a form. Kind of like they tell a story. When I make my newer music I think if it as a ScreenPlay...with Acts. And a full story. Some of my most popular beats, (ones that sell UP there in the $$$ tree) follow this.

I'm not saying think of it the way I do. As much as making a beat is a feeling...it has to have a solid form. Rather it be a box...a globe...or the universe...have the talent is making others feel what you felt. It's hard to do in music...but when you can do it..That's when people will finally say, "Hey Your really good at this."

I still love the first three chords so much though I can give you a 8...minus 2 for in my opinion confusing me and not completing them...

Score: 10

"Yeah that's the terrible version of that song..."

submission: Drop dem draws

date: August 14, 2009

Damn I sent you the one without the samples...damn...I'm fucking up. Shit banging though.

Score: 10

"Aighttt..."

submission: Out Of Time Remix [DJ Ses]

date: April 6, 2009

This is real right here. It's like some classic NYC rap. The sample is relatively crisp. It's a smooth track in general but for the most part I THOUGHT the percussion was little bland though. I like the track though in general, the chord flowed well and the verses were good they just lacked emotion sometimes. But it was hot though. It's real shit. I can appreciate shit like this.